Since Volume 1 is over now so please share your thoughts with me. Especially about pace, MC and FMCs characters, and the development of the story.

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As for volume 2, I planned to give a week's time skip, and for a whole week Ling Yun will not dual cultivate with anyone. He would only focus on raising his Yang Qi and also focus on practicing all of his techniques.

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Anyway, volume two will focus on the conflict, the conflict between Ling Yun and his father's family, and some cultivators like in the old novel.

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However, he would actually fight cultivators when he went to the Cultivator Realm later, because only a few could move around freely on Earth. (Vol3/4 later)

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In addition, he will also meet enemies from demons and angels. Unlike cultivators, they can roam Earth freely.

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- Thank You -

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